6 Sentence Sunday – “Make it Stop!”

Someone told me once you can never torture your Main Character too much.  Tee Hee.  Here are six torturous sentences from my current work:  Fire in the Woods.

Pain edged into my brain, peeling back my skull and slicing what it found inside, bearing no mercy or reluctance.  I slammed my hands against my ears, but it continued to rasp and carve a hole through my senses.  Head pounding, I cried out in agony but my voice was lost, strangled within the slicing rage of noise exploding through my mind.  I dropped to my knees, tears streaming down my face.

“Please stop!  Make it stop!”

I hope you enjoyed it!

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29 responses to “6 Sentence Sunday – “Make it Stop!”

  1. I love the immediate intensity of pain, especially: peeling back my brain. Ouch!

  2. Yup, you just described me with a migraine. :) Great description.

  3. OK, I HAD a migraine today already LOL. Wow, what a description, could feel the pain – great six!

  4. Maryellen Brady

    Oh wow, that is so vivid I may need an aspirin!

  5. Very well-written. How much can a character take? I think sometimes my main characters are stronger than me. Great post!

  6. OUCH!!!!

  7. Jeez! I hope you feel better soon! :)

  8. OH my but you are sadistic…but in a good way! ;)

  9. Well, I wouldn’t say “enjoy” was the right word. ;) But I certainly feel the pain. Well done.

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  11. I swear, I think I can hear my main characters in that piece. Oh well, their pain is our entertainment, right? :)