Well, overall they liked the changes. Yay! There were four things they felt strongly about.
#1 They thought an eleven year old girl would not say “You’re a jerk”. They wanted to change it to “You’re mean”. Okay, I guess that’s all right. It’s not as funny, but I’ll go with it. At least they agreed to put that scene back in. (They originally wanted to completely remove it.)
#2 They wanted to change up a scene where three characters were talking. They sent me an excerpt of what they wanted to do, but I couldn’t put my mind around it. I needed to ask to see the changed manuscript.
#3 In the climax, they felt strongly about the way it happened. Apparently, I did not “show” it well enough to give them a clear picture. I took some things for granted, and I supposed it backfired. They wanted to change it to the way they “thought” it had happened, which really wouldn’t be all that big a deal, but I didn’t think what they suggested was even physically possible. I tried re-writing the scene, and asked them if I’d done a better job of expressing what happened.
#4 They did not like my last word. Not the sentence… just the last word. I thought if they had a problem with the ending, that they’d want to trash the last six words. But nope. Just the last word.
The problem is that changing the last word to what they wanted would change the entire tone of the story. It is also a poetic ending, and it was not the right amount of syllables. I know… that sounds really stupid. You’ll understand when you see it.
I suggested a different word that I think expressed what they wanted, but with the correct amount of syllables. We’ll see what happens.
Overall, I think I am happy at the moment. I would really like to read it one more time to make sure everything is okay. I feel helpless… not having the version that they are working off of right in front of me, and I don’t like okaying things piece-meal.