I am searching for a few good men, or women, or teenagers who have knowledge of the military and how it works, and/ or live on or grew up on a military base in the USA.
I am going to openly admit that I’m writing fiction that has a lot of military activity in it, and I am taking a lot of wild guesses since my father never talked about the service AT ALL.
I’m looking for a few people who know more than I do who can take a look at my novel and say “Yeah, that’s possible” or “No, you are completely off your rocker… that would never happen in a zillion years.”
In a nutshell, I don’t want to ruin what I think is a pretty good story because of my lack of military knowledge.
The novel is Fire in the Woods — a sci-fi based in New Jersey on the East Coast of the USA. It starts off at McGuire Air Force Base, and then runs through several South Jersey locations. The target audience is YA (teen) girls, although there is a strong male character at her side that I think will appeal to everyone.
I have visited each location and mapped out the story. Now I just need to know if I have to change any character’s military ranks/titles/positions, or embellish/change things to make it at least somewhat plausible.
If you’ve never done a beta read before, and know about the military, that’s fine. I have people who can smack me around for writerly-mistakes. I just need a few “military content editors”.
When completed, I expect it to be 50,000 words (200 pages). I would need it read and critiqued within 30 days of starting it. (That’s about seven pages a day. Easy breezy)
I will most likely send it in 50 page sections (One week per section) so I can work on your comments for one section while you are reading the second.
Please let me know if you are interested.