Write a Story with Me #63 – Kai Damian – “Double Agent”

Write a Story with Me is a group endeavor just for the fun of it. A different writer adds a new 250 words each week. It is the ultimate Flash Fiction Challenge!

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Here’s this week’s excerpt. We hope you enjoy!

63 – Kai Damian – “Double Agent”

Morath had no recourse. The look that passed between her and Yoran told him what he needed to know.

Yoran looked at his wife, broken on the ground, despair engulfing her like a gray veil. His daughters were behind them, crying—even Sian, the strong one, was shedding silent tears.

“Natalia,” he whispered and kneeled next to his wife. “Look at me.” He lifted up her chin. Those eyes, he thought. Those beautiful green eyes watching him lovingly. Despite Natalia’s sorrow, he could still see the love behind it, and his heart beat a little faster.

“Yoran, please, there must be a way,” she pleaded.

“Yes, there is a way.” He looked her in the eye and smiled sadly.

“No, Yoran,” Natalia cried.

Wanna know what happens? You’re not gonna believe this one. Hop on over to Kai’s blog to find out. It’s worth the click. http://wp.me/p25uS3-69

Want to read more? See below for past excerpts.

If you’d like to sign up, come on over. There’s always room for more!

Parts One – Fifty Click Here

Part Fifty-One – Joe Owens

Part Fifty-Two – Shayla Kwiatkowski

Part Fifty-Three – Jennifer Eaton

Part Fifty-Four – Shan Jeniah Burton

Part Fifty-Five – Jenny Keller Ford

Part Fifty-Six – Susan Rocan

Part Fifty-Seven – Susan Roebuck

Part Fifty-Eight – Elin Gregory

Part Fifty-Nine – Nicky Wells

Part Sixty – Vanessa-Jane Chapman

Part Sixty-One – Ravena Guron

Part Sixty-Two – Julie Catherine

Part Sixty-Three – Kai Damian

Don’t forget to stop by next week to see what happens next.

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Write a Story With Me Contributors

shayla kwiatkowski	gryphonboy	Jennifer M. Eaton	Vanessa Chapman
Siv Maria	Sharon Manship	shanjeniah	Vikki (The View Outside)
Danielle Ackley-McPhail	Richard Leonard	susanroebuck	Jenny Keller Ford
aparnauteur	kaidamian	Eileen Snyder	Elin Gregory
Joe Owens	anelephantcant	mysocalledDutchlife	Nicky Wells
norahdeayjansen	Julie Catherine	Ravena Guron
jiltaroo	4amWriter	mywithershins

Write a Story with Me #51: “Natalia could be the one” with Joe Owens (joeowensblog.wordpress.com)
Write A Story With Me – Part 46 – “Fae-reness” (kaidamian.wordpress.com)

3 responses to “Write a Story with Me #63 – Kai Damian – “Double Agent””

mywithershins | October 2, 2013 at 10:01 am |

Everyone has been so wonderful in moving the story along, I can’t wait until the next week to find out what the next person has written. 🙂
Let's CUT the Crap! | October 1, 2013 at 9:22 am |

Marvelous. Sometimes you just can’t stop when you pick up the ball. 🙂
philosophermouseofthehedge | September 30, 2013 at 10:35 am |

Cool – it’s like that game you played as a kid. WIll be interested in seeing what develops