Hey! Someone’s paying attention! Special thanks to the wonderfully talented Kate Johnston for noticing a little plot glitch in the story.
There was a discrepancy in the whereabouts of the Olden leaf. In installment 6
and 7, Janosc brings the Olden leaf to Gwydyon. But in Vikki’s passage, Marci
puts the Olden leaf in a pot.
What does a writer do???? Let’s find out with Kate’s installment.
Take it away, Kate!
As Marci hurried to greet her father, she wondered if she was wise to put the Olden leaf in the pot, a gift to her father from the Establishment. She’d been so upset over Janelle’s future that she hadn’t been thinking properly. Their family custom was to concoct Needletea in that pot upon her father’s return from his missions.
Move the leaf, Marci thought. She raced back upstairs and grabbed the leaf. Then she stopped.
This wasn’t the Olden leaf. This one had the wrong shape, and it wasn’t warm to the touch.
Where was the Olden leaf? Where did this ordinary leaf come from?
Marci hunted, but the Olden leaf was gone. Did Janelle take it? No, she wouldn’t have taken it without telling her.
Wanna find out where? Visit 4AMWriter’s blog to find out! Kate’s just getting started! Part Eleven — Kate Johnston
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Part One – Jennifer M. Eaton
Part Two – J. Keller Ford
Part Three – Susan Roebuck
Part Four – Elin Gregory
Part Five – Eileen Snyder
Part Six – Mikaela Wire
Part Seven — Vanessa Chapman
Part Eight — Ravena Guron
Part Nine – Vikki Thompson
Part Ten — Susan Rocan
Part Eleven — Kate Johnston AKA 4AMWriter
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