This is one of those “type things out to clear my head” posts.
I’ve written before that if one person makes a comment, consider it. If two people make the same comment, seriously consider it. If several more people make the same comment, revise.
When I request beta reads, I ask for people to express the emotion they feel in each chapter. A few people have said that my villain gets off the hook too easily.
Now, are they expressing an emotional response, or do they think that’s an error on my part? That is what I am trying to figure out. Even after questioning them, I am still not quite sure.
For one thing, they all would have squawked at my first seven or so drafts, where he completely got away with it. I’m at least happy with my decision for him to get caught.
I guess the visceral reaction of people is that if someone kills almost a hundred people with no remorse, he should get no less than that in the end. The problem is that my villain is just too much fun. Everyone has said that he makes their skin crawl, but they love it. He is a great character, and I want him to come out and play again.
I think the problem might lie in the fact that you see him get caught, and you see the initial “punishment”, but you don’t get to see the aftermath… but if I do go and show the reader that aftermath, it will get red-lined because that is not intrinsic to the main-plotline for a POV character to be there to see it.
I don’t really have to show you the aftermath… I can show you the emotional response of the aftermath from another character’s POV. I can intertwine that into the main plotline as the characters move into the final scene.
That’s it! I got it! I knew talking to you guys would help. You are all so smart!
Gotta go! The idea is bursting out of my head, and I need to write it down before it disappears!
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