Someone told me once you can never torture your Main Character too much. Tee Hee. Here are six torturous sentences from my current work: Fire in the Woods.
Pain edged into my brain, peeling back my skull and slicing what it found inside, bearing no mercy or reluctance. I slammed my hands against my ears, but it continued to rasp and carve a hole through my senses. Head pounding, I cried out in agony but my voice was lost, strangled within the slicing rage of noise exploding through my mind. I dropped to my knees, tears streaming down my face.
“Please stop! Make it stop!”
I hope you enjoyed it!
Jennifer M Eaton 