Flash Fiction Friday Now on Wednesday! – Succumb to Fire

Spend five minutes with my favorite character, Magellan.

Magellan lifted his hands to shield his face.  Heat and flames licked against his skin, taunting, begging to devour.  They reached up and around him, a wall, impenetrable, indomitable, deadly.

He stepped back, reeling from the heat, and the flames advanced.  Sweat dampened his temple as his heart shook.  The world around him: engulfed, gone, succumbed to fire.  Everything he knew was beyond the flames.  Did it still exist?  Did the people he loved wait for him beyond?

Shuttering, terrified, Magellan took a deep breath, closed his eyes, and jumped through the fire.  But he never felt its heat.  He opened his eyes, and the flames remained, taunting, begging.

“Enough,” he whispered, and the flames disappeared.


11 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday Now on Wednesday! – Succumb to Fire

  1. This is a rip-roaring WIP. Loved every beta reading moment. Someday, it will hit the shelves for all to buy. Great stuff here.

  2. Wow! That’s really good.

  3. More, please. Incredible stuff. Did you mean “shuddering” instead of “shuttering”. Got pulled out out of the story at that. Love the name.

    • Ha! That’s one of my writers faus paus. I use those two interchangeably. Sadly, I don’t pass my FLASH past beta readers. I write it real quick, and post. Thanks, though!

  4. I particularly like ‘begging to devour’.