The publisher talked a lot about the synopsis in the closing comments of the Red-line. I found this really strange, but I thought it had merit to mention it.
For an intro into where these tips are coming from, please see my post: A Full Manuscript Rejection, or a Gold Mine? You can also click “Rant Worthy Topics” in my right navigation bar. Choose “Gold Mine Manuscript” to see all the lessons to date.
The reason I found this strange, was because they’ve already read the manuscript. They’ve already made comments, and asked for it to be re-submitted. Why are they even talking about the synopsis?
What it seemed like to me (being an optimist) is that they were actually being helpful. They probably knew that there was a chance that the author may not make all the changes to their satisfaction, and that she might submit to other avenues. They were nice enough to point out problems with the synopsis that might help her if she sent it somewhere else.
(Honestly, after reading all their synopsis critiques, I was wondering why they even asked for a “full” in the first place. I guess you never know.)
So, this is what they said…
They went through a laundry list of what the story “is not”.
It is not about this, it is not about that either. (Quoting what was mentioned in the synopsis)
It is not a character study on the main character.
The quest is not fleshed out…
These are some of the comments. I am guessing they are saying that the synopsis was too in-depth and talked about the side plots in the story.
I can totally understand this. It took me months of writing and digging and cutting and beta-bashing until I finally realized what my story is about…
Magellan Talbot has to save the world. Too bad he doesn’t know it.
Boom. Done. Now, there is a lot of other stuff going on that is SUPER important and makes the story unique, but you wouldn’t believe how hard it was for me to boil it down to the above. I kept getting bogged down by the details. The crux of the story is simple.
To save the world he has to save the Goddess.
To save the goddess he needs to fight for her.
To fight for her, he needs to find the Rapier.
To find the Rapier, he needs to remember his dreams…
The catch? He can never remember his dreams.
Or anything else about who he really is.
There is also a lot of other stuff going on. There is a love story, and a jealous brother trying to kill Magellan… but simplicity is the key for the synopsis… I need to use only the elements that draw the story forward that are closely attached to Magellan saving the Goddess.
The publisher’s next comment in the Gold Mine Manuscript was “If the story is about saving (the alternate world) then that’s your focus and everything that happens in the story needs to lead to that point. And the synopsis needs to be focused on all the activities that happen to get to that point. Tie in every character that is introduced to get there as well as why and how (the MC) is the true key… build that up and show how that’s important. Show us through actions and scenes that push the story forward.”
After reading this, I think I may have edited my own summary down too far. I bought it down to the bare bones of the fewest characters involved that draw the main plot line forward. And I also think I centered on the WRONG plotline. My current synopsis is straight and to the point, but it is more centered on the jealous brother… which is important, but not the center. I also took out Harris, who is probably equally as important in the novel as Magellan is.
Honestly, I am just not qualified to give anyone advice on a Summary. I am just as lost as the rest of you. I have helped out others with suggestions, because sometimes it is easier to have someone else boil down your story for you. The best I can do is give you the exact quote that the publisher wrote for the Gold Mine Manuscript. (above)
Read their comment over carefully, and do your best with it. And… when you get lost… remember that you have friends in the blogosphere who are always willing to help.
These are wonderful tips. I hate synopsis writing, and after reading this, I know mine needs some tightening *sighs* Thank you 🙂
Writing a synopsis can turn a writer’s hair gray. Plus, some agents want a 3-5 page synopsis, others a 1-2 page. Rather than write two different ones, I try to create one that’s 2-3 pages long and use it with all my queries. So far no one’s called me out on it being too long or short.
These are great tips. Thank you!
I usually write a long one and save it. Then I cut as much as I can and save that as the medium length. Then I cut to bare bones for the short synopsis. Then I cut that to about 150-200 words for the query. — the insanity of it all!
Someone suggested to me a two-sentence synopsis before writing my story. It helped keep me focused on what the story was about. 😮
Excellent idea. Also writing a query before the story. That way you will know if you can make your book sound enticing before you take the time to write it.
Sounds good! Thank YOU, Jennifer. ❤