Some great setting scoped out here by Elin Gregory. Ooooooo I feel a battle brewing!
“Protector Sumner?” there was a tone in the watchman’s voice that suggested that he had spoken more than once.
Yoran didn’t take his eyes off the viewing panel. In this place he could not afford to do so for an instant. The combinations of wind, updrafts from the tide and topography that made the approach so difficult demanded his full attention. He altered their course by half a point, less, adjusted the power to the starboard thrusters and waited for the ship to settle, bucking on a new gust of wind. The troops below would be having a rough time. He didn’t envy the men he would assign to cleaning out the jump bays.
“What is it Philpott?” he asked.
The young officer gestured to his own view panel. “I’m picking up an anomaly, sir. A couple of points to starboard there’s a patch – a – I don’t know what to call it sir. It looks like all the rest of the rock face but this new gadget, sir, the heat sensor – it says that it’s warmer. Look, see the yellow?”
Yoran bit back a sharp reply. “I don’t doubt your word, Philpott, but I cannot leave my station. Two points, you say? I think we must take a closer look.”
Philpott sighed and returned his attention to his controls. The Protector was old school with little time for modern gadgets. Philpott decided that news of the other two anomalies that appeared to be accompanying them towards the precipice could wait.
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Part Two – J. Keller Ford
Part Three – Susan Roebuck
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I wondered how the father was going to get to the Precipice without being questioned. Apparently his rank allows for some latitude in his actions.
Gosh! That was a good one, Elin…What they going to do about the fairies and the sister? heeee….
I’ve been enjoying the ride, and this installment is no different. But for the first time, I find myself asking, “How will you know when it’s done?” 🙂
I guess when people start winding it down. Right now I think they’re heading toward the climax – but I guess time will tell. 🙂
It is getting very exciting! 🙂
ooo,the story’s building up to a climax!!! can’t wait to see who explodes what