Side note: This is a repost from February of 2012. At that time, I was finishing a novel that I had spent several years on. I smile when I read things I had to say about that story, realizing that I have written six (yes, six) novels since then, and three novellas. I would never have believed that was possible four years ago when I wrote this. –Just crazy.
The publisher talked a lot about the synopsis in the closing comments of the Red-line. I found this really strange, but I thought it had merit to mention it.
For an intro into where these tips are coming from, please see my post: A Full Manuscript Rejection, or a Gold Mine? You can also click “Rant Worthy Topics” in my right navigation bar. Choose “Gold Mine Manuscript” to see all the lessons to date.
The reason I found this strange, was because they’ve already read the manuscript. They’ve already made comments, and asked for it to be re-submitted. Why are they even talking about the synopsis?
What it seemed like to me (being an optimist) is that they were actually being helpful. They probably knew that there was a chance that the author may not make all the changes to their satisfaction, and that she might submit to other avenues. They were nice enough to point out problems with the synopsis that might help her if she sent it somewhere else.
(Honestly, after reading all their synopsis critiques, I was wondering why they even asked for a “full” in the first place. I guess you never know.)
So, this is what they said…
They went through a laundry list of what the story “is not”.
It is not about this, it is not about that either. (Quoting what was mentioned in the synopsis)
It is not a character study on the main character.
The quest is not fleshed out…
These are some of the comments. I am guessing they are saying that the synopsis was too in-depth and talked about the side plots in the story.
I can totally understand this. It took me months of writing and digging and cutting and beta-bashing until I finally realized what my story is about…
Magellan Talbot has to save the world. Too bad he doesn’t know it.
Boom. Done. Now, there is a lot of other stuff going on that is SUPER important and makes the story unique, but you wouldn’t believe how hard it was for me to boil it down to the above. I kept getting bogged down by the details. The crux of the story is simple.
To save the world he has to save the Goddess.
To save the goddess he needs to fight for her.
To fight for her, he needs to find the Rapier.
To find the Rapier, he needs to remember his dreams…
The catch? He can never remember his dreams.
Or anything else about who he really is.
There is also a lot of other stuff going on. There is a love story, and a jealous brother trying to kill Magellan… but simplicity is the key for the synopsis… I need to use only the elements that draw the story forward that are closely attached to Magellan saving the Goddess.
The publisher’s next comment in the Gold Mine Manuscript was “If the story is about saving (the alternate world) then that’s your focus and everything that happens in the story needs to lead to that point. And the synopsis needs to be focused on all the activities that happen to get to that point. Tie in every character that is introduced to get there as well as why and how (the MC) is the true key… build that up and show how that’s important. Show us through actions and scenes that push the story forward.”
After reading this, I think I may have edited my own summary down too far. I bought it down to the bare bones of the fewest characters involved that draw the main plot line forward. And I also think I centered on the WRONG plotline. My current synopsis is straight and to the point, but it is more centered on the jealous brother… which is important, but not the center. I also took out Harris, who is probably equally as important in the novel as Magellan is.
Honestly, I am just not qualified to give anyone advice on a Summary. I am just as lost as the rest of you. I have helped out others with suggestions, because sometimes it is easier to have someone else boil down your story for you. The best I can do is give you the exact quote that the publisher wrote for the Gold Mine Manuscript. (above)
Read their comment over carefully, and do your best with it. And… when you get lost… remember that you have friends in the blogosphere who are always willing to help.
Thank God for blogging buddies because I stink at writing a synopsis!
They are the worst
Yes,the synopsis is the kicker. My novel still languishes but I wrote a two line synopsis before I started just to keep me focused. Whether it was the true or proper plot line, I cannot say but it helped me stay on track with the story. Had to trash a whole chapter but I hope the original synopsis did the trick for me.
Love these Goldmine Manuscript posts, Jennifer. 🙂
Glad you are enjoy them!
Yes, thank you. I glean something new with each post. 🙂
Hmm, in the last for years I’ve written 3 novels (all of which I hope to return to some day for publication), 3 short stories, 1 novella and I’m 1/2 way between books 2 and 3 in my trilogy. Not too shabby. Hopefully someone out there will think them worthy when the times comes to submit.
I’m sure they will your writing totally rocks Jenny 😱